Exhilarating Prose by Healey Barry;Strube Cordelia;

Author:Healey, Barry;Strube, Cordelia; [Barry Kealey, Cordelia Strube]
Language: eng
Format: epub
ISBN: 978-1-77186-041-3
Publisher: Baraka Books
Published: 2015-04-14T00:00:00+00:00

INT – NIGHT – DANCE CLUB

On the dance floor, JO and ALEX slow dance, bodies pressed together, tender, careful of each other, hardly moving. The music is earsplitting, contradicting their movement. They are in their own world, oblivious of the flashing lights.

ALEX

Is the music too loud?

JO

Yes.

ALEX

Do you want to go home?

JO

Yes.

He leads her out by the hand.2

Syntax – Which Word Where

The order in which you place your words—the ones generating the images you’re trying to slip into the reader’s mind—is critical. So is the order of the sentences, the ones containing incidents which create character and generate further incidents, evolving into a narrative.

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